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((This is my new OC Fireball. She's a candy person hehe. Yes she's based off of the fireball candy :3 She's a hand full ;3 and play nice with her))

Fireball belongs to: :iconaskthegirls:
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:star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
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:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
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Hello there,
I thought I might help by responding to your request for a critique. Firstly I thought I might compliment you for your anatomy, you've done well to capture the shape and pose of your OC. You've applied a more realistic body to the adventure time 'image/look' and this is probably on purpose to show your style which is good. The colours seem very gradient-like which can make an image flat when done digitally however again this maybe what you wanted to go for and I don't blame you. I think the only thing would be the eyes or eye in this case - I think you should try it differently or make it smaller and see how it may work with the pose and image itself.
I'm not sure what program you used but I'd just say in future try to make the image stand out more. I think you will improve though in time and I believe you have a good start when it comes to imagination.

(I'm too nice and fair to be a grumpy Critique ^_^; If you disagree feel free to comment back with your thoughts on the response.)